StoryBoard in progress

Rough Draft Critique

Things to Change:

• Talked to Matt outside of class, he gave me a great idea of making my typography grow to emphasize the obesity idea, instead of just using bold typography
• put % on the bars as they move in, instead of them growing out of ends of them?
• make the guy get skinnier throughout the video
• add blue headbands to the guy on the treadmill too
• add call to action at end!
• make white line follow through to make bottom of treadmill and make 78% come out of white line also
• use frame mobility to go to mirror guy- zoom out, then back in

Childhood Obesity Rough Draft

Obesity Stats

80% of obese children become obese adults. 58 million people in the US are overweight, 40 million are obese, and 3 million are morbidly obese, while 78% aren't meeting basic activity levels. Obesity is a contributing factor in 5 of the top 10 causes of death: heart disease, cancer, stroke, diabetes, and kidney disease. It's time to take action and lower obesity in America! Start eating healthy and get active!

80% of obese children become obese adults. 58 million people in the US are overweight, 40 million are obese, and 3 million are morbidly obese, while 78% aren't meeting basic activity levels. The physical and emotional health of an entire generation and the economic health are at stake. It's time to take action! Eat healthy! Get Active! Let's start children on the path to a healthy future!

I Want My MTV

Progress of each Scene

Final first scene. I've made a ton of changes since the beginning with this room. I've added a "Jack Ass" theme poster to connect it more with MTV. I also shrunk the size of the TV because originally there was too much edge tension. I also shrunk the size of the antennas. I changed my font and also illustrated a little mouse hole and mouse that animates, and runs across the screen. I just added a static sound when the tv comes on and has a static screen. I'm not sure if I'm going to keep the sound though because I don't know what other sounds to put in it and I'm worried just one sound effect will be more bothersome than actually helping the piece. 

The bar scene has changed a lot also. I originally started with just a black room, decided to add bottles, a shelf, wood like texture to the bar, a shot glass, and a pint glass. I also added spilt beer under the tv and made the shot glass slide in from the side. I attempted to make the pint glass empty but couldn't make it look believable. It was too glitchy. I added audio of a loud pub.

For the concert scene I changed the overall color from yellow to gray. I added the concert lights shining down and I also animated the crowd to move. The last addition I made was to add a silhouette of a girl walking in front of the tv to give the tv more interaction with the scene instead of just sitting on top of everything. I added audio of a crowd cheering.

For the beach scene I gave the sand a texture from the original and, also covered two of the legs with the sand and added a bucket for an extra pop of color and detail. I illustrated a shark fin and animated the shark fin swimming around and I animated the cloud also to sail across the top of the screen. I added audio of the waves crashing.

Starting Animation/ Final Storyboard