Rough Draft Critique

Things to Change:

• Talked to Matt outside of class, he gave me a great idea of making my typography grow to emphasize the obesity idea, instead of just using bold typography
• put % on the bars as they move in, instead of them growing out of ends of them?
• make the guy get skinnier throughout the video
• add blue headbands to the guy on the treadmill too
• add call to action at end!
• make white line follow through to make bottom of treadmill and make 78% come out of white line also
• use frame mobility to go to mirror guy- zoom out, then back in